Constructive Criticism...
I have been working on my school assignments all week-end with one trip to work on Saturday.
This evening, I took a little time to write some verses and have put them inside of my new Christmas cards that are in my online store.
So now I am going to go and rest my brain.
But first...
I would like to solicit some of your opinions.
Below I have put three verses that I wrote.
Would you please read them and tell me what you "really think"?
I would really, really appreciate it!
Thank you!!
#1.
#2.
#3.
later...
This evening, I took a little time to write some verses and have put them inside of my new Christmas cards that are in my online store.
So now I am going to go and rest my brain.
But first...
I would like to solicit some of your opinions.
Below I have put three verses that I wrote.
Would you please read them and tell me what you "really think"?
I would really, really appreciate it!
Thank you!!
#1.
A new season is upon us
Full of holiday cheer.
Greetings to you
And to all you hold dear.
Sending well wishes
And blessings your way…
May you and yours
Enjoy a blessed Christmas Day!
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
#2.
Sleigh bells and baubles
Puppies and kittens…
White Christmas snow scenes
Warm fuzzy mittens…
Scents from the kitchen
Family and Friends…
Merry Christmas,
Happy New Year…
Well wishes we send!
#3.
Christmas brings many things to our minds…
Happiness, love, a friend that is kind.
Joy, peace, good will unto men…
Gifts, good deeds, family and friends.
With all that surrounds us...
Duties and stress.
You’re such a great part of my Christmas…
I’m so very blessed.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
later...
posted by It's me, T.J. at Sunday, September 17, 2006
18 Comments:
Ok...total honesty here...are you ready for it? *DEEP BREATH*
I LOVE ALL OF THEM!
Truly.
Really, they are so creative. I am always in awe of someone who can write poetry, as I am not gifted in that department.
However, if I HAD to pick one, it would be #1.
Thanks Pattie for your help!
OK...it's just me again. I didn't realize how much work you have done putting your on-line store together. I just went over to have a peek.
You are one busy lady!
Have a good day.
Hey Pattie...
I guess we're virtually online at the same exact time!
I'm here for a couple of minutes during my lunch break.
You have a great day too!
later...
I like them all;).. don't ask me to pick.. not fair.. just spread them around through the cards!!!!...Your store is looking great.
Thank you so much Wolfbaby!
I'm a poet?
Probably not...
Hallmark hasn't been knocking on my door you know.
;+ )
later...
I vote... are we voting? ... I vote for #1. Yep, that one's my favorite. Definitely #1.
Thanks Shelly!!
I like them all, but #2 the best. Your words make me picture the scenes in my mind. Great job!
Thanks Lea!
http://peggikaye.blogspot.com/2006_09_01_peggikaye_archive.html
TJ, I tagged you last night, and Benjamin, and Benjamin decided to tag you too!
OK, see what you started! I love No. 2!! Go for 2!! hehe. Love your blog!
The poems are lovely!
Hey Peggikaye...
I left you a long comment for you on your blog!
Thanks Rosa and Angela for stopping by and for your kind comments!
later...
I'll go for #2.
Thanks Mike!
I like #2. . . # 3 is second.
Ciao
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