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Sunday, September 17, 2006

Constructive Criticism...

I have been working on my school assignments all week-end with one trip to work on Saturday.

This evening, I took a little time to write some verses and have put them inside of my new Christmas cards that are in my online store.

So now I am going to go and rest my brain.


But first...


I would like to solicit some of your opinions.

Below I have put three verses that I wrote.

Would you please read them and tell me what you "really think"?

I would really, really appreciate it!

Thank you!!



#1.
A new season is upon us
Full of holiday cheer.

Greetings to you
And to all you hold dear.

Sending well wishes
And blessings your way…

May you and yours
Enjoy a blessed Christmas Day!

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!







#2.
Sleigh bells and baubles
Puppies and kittens…

White Christmas snow scenes
Warm fuzzy mittens…

Scents from the kitchen
Family and Friends…

Merry Christmas,
Happy New Year…

Well wishes we send!




#3.
Christmas brings many things to our minds…
Happiness, love, a friend that is kind.

Joy, peace, good will unto men…
Gifts, good deeds, family and friends.

With all that surrounds us...
Duties and stress.

You’re such a great part of my Christmas…
I’m so very blessed.


Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!




later...

19 Comments:

Blogger Pattie said...

Ok...total honesty here...are you ready for it? *DEEP BREATH*

I LOVE ALL OF THEM!

Truly.

Really, they are so creative. I am always in awe of someone who can write poetry, as I am not gifted in that department.

However, if I HAD to pick one, it would be #1.

September 18, 2006 10:57 AM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Thanks Pattie for your help!

September 18, 2006 11:01 AM  
Blogger Pattie said...

OK...it's just me again. I didn't realize how much work you have done putting your on-line store together. I just went over to have a peek.
You are one busy lady!
Have a good day.

September 18, 2006 11:03 AM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Hey Pattie...

I guess we're virtually online at the same exact time!

I'm here for a couple of minutes during my lunch break.

You have a great day too!

later...

September 18, 2006 11:09 AM  
Anonymous wolfbaby said...

I like them all;).. don't ask me to pick.. not fair.. just spread them around through the cards!!!!...Your store is looking great.

September 18, 2006 2:02 PM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Thank you so much Wolfbaby!

September 18, 2006 2:58 PM  
Blogger Linda in Norman said...

hey your a poet and i didn't know it! hehehehe

September 18, 2006 7:10 PM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

I'm a poet?

Probably not...

Hallmark hasn't been knocking on my door you know.

;+ )

later...

September 18, 2006 7:16 PM  
Blogger Shelly said...

I vote... are we voting? ... I vote for #1. Yep, that one's my favorite. Definitely #1.

September 18, 2006 7:52 PM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Thanks Shelly!!

September 18, 2006 8:33 PM  
Blogger Lea said...

I like them all, but #2 the best. Your words make me picture the scenes in my mind. Great job!

September 19, 2006 6:06 AM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Thanks Lea!

September 19, 2006 10:54 AM  
Blogger Dreaming again said...

http://peggikaye.blogspot.com/2006_09_01_peggikaye_archive.html

TJ, I tagged you last night, and Benjamin, and Benjamin decided to tag you too!

September 19, 2006 11:27 AM  
Blogger Rosa said...

OK, see what you started! I love No. 2!! Go for 2!! hehe. Love your blog!

September 19, 2006 11:58 AM  
Anonymous Angela Ferreira said...

The poems are lovely!

September 19, 2006 4:22 PM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Hey Peggikaye...

I left you a long comment for you on your blog!


Thanks Rosa and Angela for stopping by and for your kind comments!

later...

September 19, 2006 7:12 PM  
Blogger Okiedoke said...

I'll go for #2.

September 19, 2006 7:45 PM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Thanks Mike!

September 19, 2006 10:27 PM  
Blogger Sicilian said...

I like #2. . . # 3 is second.
Ciao

September 21, 2006 4:46 AM  

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