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Sunday, September 17, 2006

Constructive Criticism...

I have been working on my school assignments all week-end with one trip to work on Saturday.

This evening, I took a little time to write some verses and have put them inside of my new Christmas cards that are in my online store.

So now I am going to go and rest my brain.

But first...

I would like to solicit some of your opinions.

Below I have put three verses that I wrote.

Would you please read them and tell me what you "really think"?

I would really, really appreciate it!

Thank you!!

A new season is upon us
Full of holiday cheer.

Greetings to you
And to all you hold dear.

Sending well wishes
And blessings your way…

May you and yours
Enjoy a blessed Christmas Day!

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

Sleigh bells and baubles
Puppies and kittens…

White Christmas snow scenes
Warm fuzzy mittens…

Scents from the kitchen
Family and Friends…

Merry Christmas,
Happy New Year…

Well wishes we send!

Christmas brings many things to our minds…
Happiness, love, a friend that is kind.

Joy, peace, good will unto men…
Gifts, good deeds, family and friends.

With all that surrounds us...
Duties and stress.

You’re such a great part of my Christmas…
I’m so very blessed.

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!



Blogger Pattie said...

Ok...total honesty here...are you ready for it? *DEEP BREATH*



Really, they are so creative. I am always in awe of someone who can write poetry, as I am not gifted in that department.

However, if I HAD to pick one, it would be #1.

September 18, 2006 10:57 AM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Thanks Pattie for your help!

September 18, 2006 11:01 AM  
Blogger Pattie said...

OK...it's just me again. I didn't realize how much work you have done putting your on-line store together. I just went over to have a peek.
You are one busy lady!
Have a good day.

September 18, 2006 11:03 AM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Hey Pattie...

I guess we're virtually online at the same exact time!

I'm here for a couple of minutes during my lunch break.

You have a great day too!


September 18, 2006 11:09 AM  
Anonymous wolfbaby said...

I like them all;).. don't ask me to pick.. not fair.. just spread them around through the cards!!!!...Your store is looking great.

September 18, 2006 2:02 PM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Thank you so much Wolfbaby!

September 18, 2006 2:58 PM  
Blogger Linda in Norman said...

hey your a poet and i didn't know it! hehehehe

September 18, 2006 7:10 PM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

I'm a poet?

Probably not...

Hallmark hasn't been knocking on my door you know.

;+ )


September 18, 2006 7:16 PM  
Blogger Shelly said...

I vote... are we voting? ... I vote for #1. Yep, that one's my favorite. Definitely #1.

September 18, 2006 7:52 PM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Thanks Shelly!!

September 18, 2006 8:33 PM  
Blogger Lea said...

I like them all, but #2 the best. Your words make me picture the scenes in my mind. Great job!

September 19, 2006 6:06 AM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Thanks Lea!

September 19, 2006 10:54 AM  
Blogger Dreaming again said...


TJ, I tagged you last night, and Benjamin, and Benjamin decided to tag you too!

September 19, 2006 11:27 AM  
Blogger Rosa said...

OK, see what you started! I love No. 2!! Go for 2!! hehe. Love your blog!

September 19, 2006 11:58 AM  
Anonymous Angela Ferreira said...

The poems are lovely!

September 19, 2006 4:22 PM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Hey Peggikaye...

I left you a long comment for you on your blog!

Thanks Rosa and Angela for stopping by and for your kind comments!


September 19, 2006 7:12 PM  
Blogger Okiedoke said...

I'll go for #2.

September 19, 2006 7:45 PM  
Blogger It's me, T.J. said...

Thanks Mike!

September 19, 2006 10:27 PM  
Blogger Sicilian said...

I like #2. . . # 3 is second.

September 21, 2006 4:46 AM  

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